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Wednesday, May 22, 2019

haiku poem

this is my work

2 comments:

  1. Hi Xavier, Lauren here from Room 6.
    I really liked your Haiku poem. It made me laugh, especially the the bit where it was like "The rain sounds like snoring, But it was me snoring.' So funny.
    It rhymed which was good. Maybe next time right more to make me understand.
    Have a good day!

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  2. I tryed to make a ryme.

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