Wednesday, June 5, 2019
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Hello dear brother,
ReplyDeleteThis is Tama from room 6 ask STB, What I like about your Poem is your images about fortnite and your words explaining about your images. I love the way you wrote words about the topic that you are doing. next time you could make a real poem and if you don't know what is a poem ask for help so you can learn because that's what school is all about.
From you best brother Tama
Hello Xavier, This is Ramsay from Room 6, I enjoyed looking at the images because they were very bright and colourful. I did want to tell you about the layout of your poem like, what kind is it? and can you maybe make it so it looks like a poem? i got confused because of the numbers that you put before the word/s. I liked your choice of words like the one that said "Rip Tilted". maybe next time think about what you are writing about and how to lay it out? Hope to hear from you soon! Thank you and keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Ramsy the numbers the number 1 means the first line number 2 beside it is how much syllables.
DeleteHi Xavier, this is Gustan
ReplyDeleteI really liked your post. I liked how you you added lot of images so we know what you are writing. I liked how you told me the characters. Mamie next time you could put more words in so we know more about your google drawing keep the work up
Hi best brother ever thanks for the nice words see you.
ReplyDeleteThey are good images thanks for the nice comment.
I have not much words because I put syllables.
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