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Tuesday, July 23, 2019

On the holiday


6 comments:

  1. hi Xavier
    I liked how you add a lot of detail in your story.
    I also played fortnite at 4pm .
    I notice that you sheared fortnite.
    from Daniel.

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  2. hey xavier
    i like the picture of fortnite when you said the pond monster and the robot
    i like fortnite to

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  3. Hi xavier
    Hi xavier I like how you put in your capital letters
    I also put in cap letters
    Can you put full stops in the rite place?
    from Francis

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  4. hi Xavier
    I like that you told us that you went with your Dad
    the fortnite image reminds me about 2018 and 2019
    you have nothing to fix up
    by Xavier

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