I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, July 23, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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hi Xavier
ReplyDeleteI liked how you add a lot of detail in your story.
I also played fortnite at 4pm .
I notice that you sheared fortnite.
from Daniel.
hey xavier
ReplyDeletei like the picture of fortnite when you said the pond monster and the robot
i like fortnite to
I did not say pond mondster
DeleteHi xavier
ReplyDeleteHi xavier I like how you put in your capital letters
I also put in cap letters
Can you put full stops in the rite place?
from Francis
I did
Deletehi Xavier
ReplyDeleteI like that you told us that you went with your Dad
the fortnite image reminds me about 2018 and 2019
you have nothing to fix up
by Xavier