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Thursday, August 22, 2019

My dream playground


this is what I want in this school

2 comments:

  1. Hi Xavier it is Francis
    I like you playground on your venngage
    I like your dream playground
    Can you put in full stop
    Keep going Xavier
    From Francis

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  2. hi Xavier
    I like how you are added a little bit of detall in your writing.
    I also like the things that on the playground that you can play with.
    I think you need to put in fullStops in your writing.
    From Robert

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